I like to think I’m pretty good at writing description, even though
I use it sparingly in my books. I don’t like reading a lot of it, so I don’t
write a lot of it. I put in just enough to spark an image in the reader's mind. Some people prefer reading a mile-long paragraph describing a
character’s dress. Not me.
But I do want to see the characters –their
mannerisms, expressions, actions, reactions – the overall package. A couple of cleverly
written sentences usually does the trick. And once in a while, one word can do it
too. I’m talking about that one word that shows us body language, facial
expression and emotion.
If you remember from a few controversial blog posts ago, I collect dialogue tags. Sadly, that well has dried up. So I’ve started collecting one-word descriptions. Here’s what I’ve got so far:
He balked
He blanked.
He blustered.
He bristled.
He chilled.
He collapsed.
He cratered.
He crumbled.
He drooped.
He eased.
He exploded.
He festered.
He flared.
He fumed.
He loosened.
He melted.
He raged.
He recovered.
He sagged.
He scoffed.
He scoffed.
He seethed.
He shrank.
He slumped.
He snapped.
He soured.
He strained.
He stirred.
He sulked.
He sulked.
He surrendered.
He thundered.
He twitched.
He weakened.
He withered.
He withdrew.
And I'm confident that these are just the beginning.
Remember, one-word descriptions should only be used occasionally, otherwise your novel will read
like Dick and Jane (and never get into an editor's hands).
Ah...it's so nice to have a hobby. Do you guys have any to add?
Thanks for sharing your list with us.
ReplyDeleteHe cocooned
ReplyDeleteCollecting words is a great hobby. No need to dust!
He yo-yoed and he zigzagged?
ReplyDeleteHey Dotti, Funny, I've been collecting those, too. I have a long list--oddly enough, a lot of them came from Robert B. Parker mystery novels. Those books are VERY lean on description, etc. and he was a master at less is more.
ReplyDeleteFor kid's books, Chris Grabenstein is also a master of the very unusual verbs.
Here's one, from me---she cavorted.
Happy trails!
bobbi c.
Bobbi, if you have the list in a word document, I'd love a copy!
ReplyDeleteGreat list, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteLoved the list! How about, "He crashed." meaning wore out.
ReplyDeleteYOU ROCK.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing these, Dotti! :)
This is such a fun list! Thank you
ReplyDeleteNice. I'm a minimalist too as far as descriptions go, but a character better not be blank, dang it!
ReplyDeleteThat's an awesome list. I'm a fan of "cooed", and the reaction "blinked", "fidgeted", and "blanched".
nice and very helpful, thanks!
ReplyDeleteOoh, interesting list!!
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